tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2902783052984261962.post9113358946209979711..comments2010-09-17T23:46:07.781-07:00Comments on Chris Sayer: Journalism: Assignment 7 - Runningham Student Protestchris_sayerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13242798159527351281noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2902783052984261962.post-85686185908252062132007-11-27T06:07:00.000-08:002007-11-27T06:07:00.000-08:00Critical AnalysisI found it was important to begin...Critical Analysis<BR/><BR/>I found it was important to begin the introduction with the students, as this will involve and attract the target audience. Also, the fact that the protest was successful would be important, as this would show the readership that the student body can get their voices heard, and maybe even inspire other readers.<BR/><BR/>I feel I used quotes adequately, as well as demonstrated the inverted pyramid.<BR/><BR/>More information, such as quotes from one of the protestors would have made the story more authentic, but a quote from the SU president acts as a voice for the student body.<BR/><BR/>I felt that including information about the top-up fees was necessary, but not overly important, which is why I left it until the last two paragraphs.chris_sayerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13242798159527351281noreply@blogger.com